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Barbed wire and broken bottles
In this goddamn jungle camp
Dead children and twisted bodies
Each time you light your lamp

Bullet-wounds and a busted knee
This ain't no little bar fight
This ain't no boxing on TV
This is life, this jungle night

Helicopters are flying in
Men from southern camps
And I take a sip of gin
Before I light my lamps

Just strips of ripped-up shirt
Cover oozing floods of red
Bloody bullet in the dirt
You! Put this one to bed

My red cross shines tonight
With more blood than dye
Just the scalpel in my sight
I try not to let them die

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A poem about a Vietnam War field hospital and one of its medics. Intended to be rough around the edges.

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~Cahotic Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
I love this, gritty and dark yet with a small light of hope just how the soldiers must have remembered the medic camps and how the whole war itself was portrayed. I love your word choices and the imagery you use. Love the repetitive notion of lighting a lamp and I adore the last stanza.. Great work :D
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Thanks, I'm very very glad you liked it :)
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